I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi shanaya i love this story ! And i like how you used my name ( HAHAHA ;3) And i love the text you're useing i hope you like this comment ! :D I love u ( as a friend) *^*
Hi Shanaya It must have been a crazy day for you.You must have been in a lot of trouble for throwing your teacher over the other side of the world From Ella
Hi Shanaya!, I like the way you said I was in a fight with Ronav and Luca in your story ! and you described 'flung them across the room!' But maybe next time you could make the box you write in bigger? It reminded me about the time I watched this music video and a kid had powers!
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows: 1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared. 2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say 3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Hi shanaya i love this story !
ReplyDeleteAnd i like how you used my name ( HAHAHA ;3)
And i love the text you're useing i hope you like this comment ! :D
I love u ( as a friend) *^*
Hi Shanaya
ReplyDeleteIt must have been a crazy day for you.You must have been in a lot of trouble for throwing your teacher over the other side of the world
From Ella
it is fake story but fanks
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ReplyDeleteHi Shanaya!,
I like the way you said I was in a fight with Ronav and Luca in your story ! and you described 'flung them across the room!'
But maybe next time you could make the box you write in bigger?
It reminded me about the time I watched this music video and a kid had powers!