I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
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Wednesday, 25 November 2020
EOTC jelly park
Hi guys today in wga and hur 4 I have been working on a DLO on water safety rules. for this task I have been using google drawing.
Hi Shanaya, I really like your work. I like the colours that you put on. I like the way how it isnt just a plain background with some rules on it, you have some things on the side and other things. Maybe next time you could maybe put a picture on that relates to what you're doing.
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Hi Shanaya,
ReplyDeleteI really like your work. I like the colours that you put on. I like the way how it isnt just a plain background with some rules on it, you have some things on the side and other things. Maybe next time you could maybe put a picture on that relates to what you're doing.