Huru 3 story

 these past few weeks I have been working on an story with 1004 words in it. In our story there had to be friends , train track , train , sushi, cheetah and it had to be at 3am. I did my story about a group of friends going out having fun after a sleepover. This took a long time and I really enjoyed doing this. I would defiantly do this again.

Did you find this interesting and what more could I do to make it fun to read.?

3am in the foggy morning  Alexia questioned its

Monday, right?, Alexia and her friends headed

off from a sleep over into the forest thinking about

drawing a cheetah on their math test to get out

of it. Alexia and her friends were walking into the

forest while eating  sushi, Alexia had a glance of a

musty mold filled train track with a train half on the

train track tipped over. As Alexia ran off into the distance

with all her friends wondering why Alexia slowed down

to stand before a train laying down with rust and mold

all over it. Alexia jumped to climb onto the train just as

all her friends catched up to stare at her with an awkward

worried look on their faces. Alexia ``Come on let's

have a look at the inside”, as they all know that alexia

dad fixes trains and  partly owns one with other friends.

They all trusted Alexia and all said “ If anything goes

wrong it's your fault” Alexia didn't care much cause

I mean In every horror movie everything goes wrong

but in reality you will have a problem then later

forget it. The  fog starts to go whoosh be gone!

We all go through the main door of the train. It started

to make a creaking noise but Alexia and her

friends didn't care, as they carried on they had

to crawl across the dusty ground. Vines coming

through the broken window with glass all on the

floor. Just like all the horror movies a spider

jumps out like Hello! As one of Alexia's friends

screamed as loud as they could, we all started

to laugh real loud. 10 minutes later while walking

in the train, Alexia's friends decided to take a

break and finish their sushi. When they started

to finish their sushi ALexia said “hey let's go back

and eat  more sushi”. Alexia and her friends

all head back and sleep for a few more hours,

but Alexia waked  them all up to say “how about

we skip school to explore more into the forest

past the train”. As we are getting changed alexia

had a distinctive thought: what if we have a

challenge to see how long we can stay in the

forest separated. Alexia go’s and tell them as

some shake their head and some nod their head

but that didn't stop alexia. 

Alexia said to her friends “look,

you're either going to school or

doing this challenge! They all

looked at each other and said they wanted to

do the challenge.

P2   The Challenge

 4:43 Alexia and her friends waddled their

way to the forest with the HUnTEd train

track, they don't know if it's haunted but

they just wanted to name it The HUnTEd

Train track. they take place and walk into

the forest then they separate into their

different spots with food, clothes and all they

needed for their midnight challenge. The rules

are they can move around and move spot to

spot but if they see someone else they have

to go the other way. As alexia and her friends

talked into their walky talky making jokes and

playing around, they laughed and cried at the

same time. After they finished pigging out on

snacks they then realised it's now 12:00. Alexia

then goes into the walky talky and says “ meet

up at the stop sign” they all jump and leap there

way back to the stop sign. Alexia said “let's come

back at 6pm and finish the challenge” Alexia

whispered. Back at alexia’s friends house they

laughed at the thought that everyone else is at school

doing the maths test. Alexia + her friends watched

movies and acted scenes in the titanic, they also did

a blind fold makeup challenge. It looked hideous 😒😑

and funny.  Alexia kept checking the time

and after a lot of fun crying, laughing and eating

It then became 5:46 Alexia Out of the blue jumped

out of excitement to shout “TIME TO FINISH THE

ChALLENGE!!!!!!!” all of alexia’s friends jumped

out of fright, they all got  packed with all of what

they needed. They then headed out and walked

to the stop sign in front of the forest. ALexia and

her friends then stomped into the forest and setted

up their spots  and started to go back into talking

into their walkie talkies and giggled about stuff. Alexia

started to talk about what she wanted to do when

she got older and her favorite quote or motto.  As

then her friend started to say what they wanted to

do when they were older  and their favorite quote/motto.

One of alexia’s friends said “ I wanna become

an actress and I like the quote “ you shouldn’t

be always available for someone who doesn't

even ask you how you are doing” another one

of alexia’s friends said “ I wanna be an archaeologist

and my favorite quote/ small saying

“ disappointed but not surprised” and the

last one said “  I wanna be ME! And I like

the quote stars can't shine without the darkness”.

Alexia and her friends keep talking and talking

when their phone hit 9:00 They then say 4 more

hours left and we have complete the challenge

but suddenly a scrunch of dry leaf sound was heard

by Alexia, Alexia wasn't scared but the dry leaf sound

kept coming closer and closer like bee to its hive but

suddenly the noise stopped right behind her she slowly

turned her head around and that's when it hit.

Rose red blood was everywhere and a brown

haired girl layed down speechless without a noise

the thing that made the noise backed off leaving

the clueless girl lay with no expression on her face.

The same thing happens to all her friends,

weird sounds then clueless bodys laying upon

the floor, with blood covering the forest beauty

and clueless faces. The story behind the death

of 5 girls just happens to be a page with not answer. 

Story only - 1004 words.