I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Wednesday, 16 August 2017
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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hi shanaya i like the way described the wrybills i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.
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ReplyDeleteIt is great to see your work up on your blog! We did this book for a group in the Study earlier in the term. I like how you have used images that relate to the text.
Maybe next time you could try a different tool to present your work such as PowToon or google slides.
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Hi I like the google docs because of the photos how log did it tack you to do the? by Emma.N
ReplyDeleteHey Shanaya It's Aone from south hornby school I like the egg crushing bit because It is like my mind blowing when ever i see it This reminds me of the beach but you could improve on doing it a bit more bigger. And you can make the writing a bit more bigger. I have one question for you why did you do so much pithier's and a lot of righting it kind of look's you have no space?
ReplyDeleteHi Shanaya I like the way you are described it but you could do a litell bit more deital but it still looks good.
ReplyDeleteHey Shanaya It's Joslyne from south hornby school I like the egg crushing bit because It is like my mind blowing when ever i see it This reminds me of the beach but you could improve on doing it a bit more bigger. And you can make the writing a bit more bigger. I have one question for you why did you do so much pithier's and a lot of righting it kind of look's you have no space?
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Deletebecause she copped me
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