hi today in wanaga we did an 100 word challenge. we did this with a picture of a dog wrapped in a blanket in a forest. This 100 word challenge was done on our Chromebooks.
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Monday, 19 October 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Shanaya,
ReplyDeleteI like your story a lot but I think you could maybe try and fix you writing and also maybe add a picture of what you were writing about?
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ReplyDeleteHi Shanaya
ReplyDeleteHow are you? I like how you put where he was and that he used to have a owner. Next time could you add the photo you were writing about? Overall it was amazing.
- Carla