hi today we did a boring sentence and made it a complex sentence. This is what I came up with.
She walked the dog.
She walked the dog sadly.
Last week she walked the dog sadly.
Last week she walked the dog sadly around the block.
last week she slowly walked the dog sadly around the block.
He went to school.
He went to school hungry.
Last eternity he went to school hungry.
last eternity he went to Hornby high school hungry.
last eternity he went running to Hornby high school hungry.
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Monday, 2 March 2020
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Hi Shanaya
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your sentences! We were working on simple to complex sentences, I think that's what you meant by boring... I hope you didn't find the activity boring as I was so impressed with the way you were sharing your sentences in class!
Don't forget where your capital letters need to go!
- Miss Birtch
Ok I will remember for next time but thanks for letting me know.
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