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Thursday 27 June 2019

can he save him

Can He Save Her?
Narrative Writing


WALT: write a narrative that is descriptive (paints a picture in the reader's mind)

This week we are creating a piece of narrative writing about a comic book hero! 

You are to use the picture on the left as your story starter or even your story finisher. Not sure what this means? Well, the picture could be telling you what is happening in the beginning of your story. You would describe the events from the picture then tell your audience what happens next. Or if you’re using the picture as your story ending, what are the events that led to this action packed scene?

Fill in the below table to help you plan.

Planning:
Your Thoughts and Answers:
Are you using the picture as the beginning or ending of your story?
Ending 
Hero:
Spiderman  and Todoroki
Villain:
All might 
Other Characters (if any):
Deku bakugou krishema
Problem:
Deku gets captured so all might can get his powers/ quirk
Solution:
They all defeat all might and all might goes to jail.
What is going to happen
All might captured deku and posted deku of the tall building and todoroki tried to save deku but bakugou exploded todoroki and deku felled onto bakugou and then todoroki falls onto bakugouś head bakugou ended bride style holeding deku

Todoroki ,bakugou and kirishima rushed across the city almost flying to save deku 
If beginning, what could happen next?
They all go for an ice cream will waiting for deku
If ending, what happened before this scene?
They all realized deku was captured and went looking for deku

Start Writing Here:




Todoroki  Bakugou and Kirishima are 3 friends from toko they are all 20 kirishima has red spiky hair shark looking teeth and a scar on his eye.  Bakugou has spiky blond hair with red eyes. Todoroki as red and white hair and he loves to read. The 3 friends were eating ice creams at alexia’s  ice cream store but out of the window they saw deku and all might together they new that was bad so Todoroki, Bakugou and Kirishima rushed across the city almost flying to save Deku who was falling from a twenty five story hotel. Then Spiderman starts chasing after a villain named All might who was running like a lightning bolt  and laughing his head off then Todoroki caught Deku as Kirishima followed Spider man Bakugou banged into Todoroki and then Bakugou caught Deku bridle style and Todoroki landed on Bakugou's head. Bakugou shouted GET OFF ALL OF YOU so they did they all went to deku’s house but then ……...

Term 2 Week 9 Wonderful World



hello😀 this week we have been reading a book called teamwork
its about netball it is a great story to learn how to be a team player
hope you like what I have done plz comment

by shanaya

Thursday 13 June 2019

pic disriptive

As they drive the airplane they see a sunny shining slowly sparking in the conner of there eye they say it is breathtaking and luxurious.

The clouds are fuzzy as melted marshmallows . they are as crazy as mrs thoms fluffy as a cat they are as white as a whiteboard.

Lots of colours flashing in their eyes buttons and more buttons it would be hard not to press them all. There is red ones and black ones and even green buttons.

The ocean is as blue as the sky beautiful like mrs north it looks like there is diamonds in it.


                                                           par शनाया