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hi this week we have been reading a book called niggles and this is what we was set up to do
plz give me feedback on  my work

T3W4 Believers

Make a copy of this Doc

Read: Select a persuasive text from the choice of 4 from the book ‘Neighbourhood Niggles’.

1.On this week’s Doc type the main character(s) in this issue and the pages , 

e.g. Mr & Mrs Fitz -pages2-3

Pg  Mr & Mrs Fitz -pages2-3

2. Type the ISSUE (problem).

Should Mr and Mrs Fitz keep hens in their yard?

3. Create a 2 column table of the problem and its consequences.

problem	consequence
Small backyard	Not much room for many animals
Consent clucking	Have to wear ear muffs There very annoying No escape from the noise You can’t hear the tv
Hens molting	Feathers everywhere on the backyard Fethers blowing into others backyards Constantly raking up the feathers. Can’t keep the windows open. Feathers floating into the house. Feathers floating into the food

Hen droppings

The smell gets to every corner of the house. Visitors stop calling. It gets in the gutters.

4. Solution - Type who the writer is and what solution they want, e.g. Suzie Long wants Mr & Mrs Fitz to move with their hens to the country. 

Suzie long wants mr and mrs fitz to move to another country to a bigger space for the hens and don’t have neighbours.

5. Go to the question BELOW for the story you are working on and write a full sentence answer to the inference question for the niggle you are working on.

6. Go to the question BELOW for the story you are working on and write a full sentence answer to the CLARIFY question for your text.

Question Numbers 5 & 6 For Each Text

Pages 2&3 Suzie Long

5. Inference Question: How does Suzie Long like to keep her house as far as tidiness goes? How do you know this? (pg 3)   suzie likes to  keep her house tidy because she said that she can’t have her windows open.

6. Clarifying Question:  What does Suzie mean when she says ‘There is no escaping from it?

Suzie long means that you can hear it everywhere and  that you can’t get away from the noise.

Pages 4 & 5 Owen Simmons

5. Inference Question: What would make the empty section attractive for kids? (pg 5)

The kids on nite street would play on the  playground and kick their balls around. Kids like to play around so a playground would be a great idea.

6. Clarifying Question:  What does Owen mean when he says, ‘It would be an investment for the future?’

 It mean that Something that would be good to purchase or buy for the community some time in the future.

Pages 6 & 7 

5. Inference Question: What sort of people might the Barretts be and why do you think that?

The barretts are people who like their backyard to be colourful and bright I think that because they have all sorts of lights and it is obvious that they like lots of colour in their backyard and it to be bright.

6. Clarifying Question:  In what way are the lights cheerful? Pg 6

The lights are cheerful because of all the different colours.

Pages 8 & 9 May Christie

5. Inference Question: Why do you think kids without pocket money might be friendly with kids who have pocket money.

To get things off them like candy, fizzy and fish and chips I think people should be friends  with the people with pocket money because of their personality.

6. Clarifying Question:  Why would some kids be carrying other kids’ bags, doing their homework or loaning them their jackets or shoes? The kids do their work for the money because they don’t get given money by their parents.

4x table

schools should start latar

hoi for the last six days we have been doing persuasive writing and this is what I've been working on plz comment on my post

Schools everywhere have lots of late students because family’s have things to do and appointments. It makes sense to start schools later.

Firstly families have canceling for the whole family how is living in the house and some people and kids have to go in the mornings. For  example one family might have canceling in the mornings and have to go with their kids at school time.

Secondly kids have to get up early and wash their face,  brush their teeth and put their uniform on and eat breakfast and it takes a long time. For example kids get up early and pack their bags and get ready and do stuff than be late for school.

Thirdly parents have  to get work done around the house at night because they have their jobs while kids are at school and get money for bills and for food and stay up late and don't get sleep.

For example parents have work to do around the house and they stay up late get no sleep and in the morning they sleep in.

Inconclusive my opinion  schools should start later and there are my three reasons why.

should we use animals to help with work?

 Should we use animals to help with jobs?

 By Shanaya

In my option we can animals for certain things but must be rewarded for their hard work.

Firstly I think that it is mean to use birds even though we can send ourselves and that means that we are lazy.

Secondly if they use them to save lives than that's good but they should be reworded because they work all day to save people for example dogs can sniff out cancer.

Lastly other jobs like making dogs race for money is mean its animal abuse and crul animals should not be used for money animals need to be loved and looked after.

I think that animals need to be treated the way you want to be treated.