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Friday 15 June 2018

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Uni’s  Poem

Uni has a pink horn and long pink hair
She has a cute smile and blue and green eyes looking into the future
Her refreshing breath smells like lollipops
She walks like a fast cat in the night
Her touch feel like a cotton ball
She gives love to people

She sounds like a marshmallow she says hello

3 comments:

  1. Hi Shanaya its Isla,
    I like the way you used the name uni. Your descriptions were awesome and I really like the detail you used. Maybe next time you could turn your poem into a song and you could become a famous singer like Shania Twain. This poem reminds me of the song 'pink fluffy unicorns dancing on rainbows' because the pink hair reminds me of the unicorn in the songs with its fluffy pink mane and fur.

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  3. Hi Shanaya,
    I love the way you described your character. Next time you could add a video of what you were watching when you wrote the poem.this reminds me of when I made a poem like this. :D

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