HI guys the past few days in reading we have been creating our own horror story with a buddy if you want. I have been working on my own creating a horror story about someone following the main character Max. this rando is an serial killer who try's to kill Max. This story is not finished and is still in working progress. If you have any ideas for the following of the story please in the comments tell me what you think should happen next. This story is based on my story called runaway.
Start draft :
One really boring monday morning at school
“ Hey Max!” “hi Oliva”... Oliva gave Max
a big hug while Max just stand there very
confused and surprised a little. The two
walk to class and on the way they see Axel
“ hey Axel my bro” said Max “ sup my bro
Max” Oliva pouts “ what about me!? She
said they look at her like she’s a maniac
coming to give them a hug. They say at
the same time “ bruh” she gives them
another pout they start walking back to
class as Max groans “ why do we have to
go I hate math” Axel said “ we have no
chose or I would be have a blast at the
pool Oliva laughs “ it’s not that bad
were doing geometry and geometry isn't
as bad as algebra. They all laugh as they
walk into the class and sit down on their
seats after a long boring period of maths
and social science they go to their favorite
part of the school , the school roof. They
talk about the sports they do and their
next period. After school they walk each
other to their house once it's just Axel and Max
there one block away from Max’s house so
after 10 minutes of walking they are Max’s
house when they reach Max’s door Max waves
goodbye to Axel and Axel waves back. As
Max walks through the door he feels the
warm air against his head he yells “ im home
to him” him mum comes running and gives him
a big hug. As he pushes his mum off him he
walks into his room and feels like someone
has been watching him while he walked back
home with his friends. He feels his body
shaking. The next past days its been the same
feeling but this one day he looked back and
saw this dude dressed in full black. “Wow
he’s creepy” he said trying to act all brave
as he shivers like he’s traumatized. Every day
he would walk with his friends and secretly
look back to see this rando who is following
him. One day max was talking to his friends
and out of nowhere Olivia said “hey maybe we
should go watch the new movie called The Meg”
Axel replied “yeah we should” Axel also said
“at 9.00 we should go watch it” they all ask
their parents they all said yes but only if
your back before 11.00. The parents all
know that they're old enough to go out
with their friends. So on saturday they all
got together at 8.50 and hung out for
sometime. They all started to walk to the
movie theatre then it hit 9.00 and they all
started to walk into the theatre and pay
for their tickets. “ This will be GREAT”
Olivia said. Axel “ shhhhh no yelling in the
movie theatre we’ll get kicked out” Max said
“ yeah we should not be yelling” they walk and
sat on there seats and one row above there
was Shilla , James and Maddy their top rivals
they watched the movie hoping that Shilla, James
and Maddy would not recognize them and fortunately
they did not. They were giggling a little that
they did not recognize them. Max thought
“ didnt I see the rando who keeps following me”
“ I swore I saw him follow us this whole time”
Max just ignored that feeling and kept watching
the movie. Once the movie was finished and
they all left the building and talking to each other
while waiting for their parents to come pick them up
after Max said goodbye to Olivia and Axel. Once
they all leave and it's just Max left he starts
to walk home until that rando comes up to him and
approaches him.
“ Hey Max!” “hi Oliva”... Oliva gave Max
a big hug while Max just stand there very
confused and surprised a little. The two
walk to class and on the way they see Axel
“ hey Axel my bro” said Max “ sup my bro
Max” Oliva pouts “ what about me!? She
said they look at her like she’s a maniac
coming to give them a hug. They say at
the same time “ bruh” she gives them
another pout they start walking back to
class as Max groans “ why do we have to
go I hate math” Axel said “ we have no
chose or I would be have a blast at the
pool Oliva laughs “ it’s not that bad
were doing geometry and geometry isn't
as bad as algebra. They all laugh as they
walk into the class and sit down on their
seats after a long boring period of maths
and social science they go to their favorite
part of the school , the school roof. They
talk about the sports they do and their
next period. After school they walk each
other to their house once it's just Axel and Max
there one block away from Max’s house so
after 10 minutes of walking they are Max’s
house when they reach Max’s door Max waves
goodbye to Axel and Axel waves back. As
Max walks through the door he feels the
warm air against his head he yells “ im home
to him” him mum comes running and gives him
a big hug. As he pushes his mum off him he
walks into his room and feels like someone
has been watching him while he walked back
home with his friends. He feels his body
shaking. The next past days its been the same
feeling but this one day he looked back and
saw this dude dressed in full black. “Wow
he’s creepy” he said trying to act all brave
as he shivers like he’s traumatized. Every day
he would walk with his friends and secretly
look back to see this rando who is following
him. One day max was talking to his friends
and out of nowhere Olivia said “hey maybe we
should go watch the new movie called The Meg”
Axel replied “yeah we should” Axel also said
“at 9.00 we should go watch it” they all ask
their parents they all said yes but only if
your back before 11.00. The parents all
know that they're old enough to go out
with their friends. So on saturday they all
got together at 8.50 and hung out for
sometime. They all started to walk to the
movie theatre then it hit 9.00 and they all
started to walk into the theatre and pay
for their tickets. “ This will be GREAT”
Olivia said. Axel “ shhhhh no yelling in the
movie theatre we’ll get kicked out” Max said
“ yeah we should not be yelling” they walk and
sat on there seats and one row above there
was Shilla , James and Maddy their top rivals
they watched the movie hoping that Shilla, James
and Maddy would not recognize them and fortunately
they did not. They were giggling a little that
they did not recognize them. Max thought
“ didnt I see the rando who keeps following me”
“ I swore I saw him follow us this whole time”
Max just ignored that feeling and kept watching
the movie. Once the movie was finished and
they all left the building and talking to each other
while waiting for their parents to come pick them up
after Max said goodbye to Olivia and Axel. Once
they all leave and it's just Max left he starts
to walk home until that rando comes up to him and
approaches him.
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